This is a paragraph out of my Business to Business Brand Management textbook:
1. In the 4th line down, there should be a comma after the word "right".
2. In the 10th line down, it should say "give" not "gave".
3. In the 12th line, there should be a comma after "simple".
4. In the 13th line, it should say "to" not "with".
Good job! At 4 points each, that adds up to 16 points.
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