Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Mystery Character

The blood-filled vial that once hung around her neck is absent with the reminiscence of her past. She is envied by women all over the world for her prominent features, diverse children from around the globe, and infamous on-screen romance turned celebrity marriage. Aside from countless leading roles, her humanitarian work has included helping refugees, AIDS orphans, and victims of genocide. She is known for her signature lips and can be spotted in Los Angeles hand-in-hand with her famous husband.
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  1. 100w ProfApril 2, 2009 at 10:13 AM

    A little too much "telling" me about her, instead of "showing" me her. I'd like to see a little more description.

    Good details: blood-filled vial, signature lips, hand-in-hand
    Doesn't work: "is absent with the reminiscence of her past." Huh? Confusing.

    8/10

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